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Tuesday, January 18, 2011

The Secrets Zone

By:Kristopher Odom
Entry From:The Journal Of Agent Knock Out

“Jump time in T-minus 30 seconds.” It was time. It was the middle of the night and I was about to start my first mission. I grabbed my parachute and my gear. In my backpack full of gadgets my favorites being folding hook that looks like a IPad, my night vision/regular vision binoculars, my video watch, and my computer screen that is built into my sunglasses that is all the gadgets that I can tell you about for now. My mission was to parachute 14 miles away from an enemy base and then sneak into it and gather Intel that contains the code to the nuclear missile that is aimed at the White House. I have less than two days to complete this mission. “Jump Time in T minus 10 seconds”. Here I gooooooo!!!!!!!! I stepped out of the airplane door, beginning my free fall to the earth 7000 feet below. Wind whipped past my face, the green blur beneath me quickly materializing into trees of the jungle. Hand clenched on my ripcord, I pulled the cord and my parachute flew out and yanked me to a slower speed.This is AWESOME! I only fell for  67 seconds but it felt like forever. At first it was fun but it didn’t last the whole trip to the ground. Alright fun's over. I have to focus on my mission. I looked at a map of the area on my IPhone and planed my route to my first checkpoint. Three miles until I have to get in my camouflage. After walking about a mile I heard a noise. What was that noise? It almost sounds like a snake! I turned around to see a Full Grown Python Snake! Time for my tazer darts, I am glad I pack them for my mission. I took careful aim and shot the Python right in the neck.As i put my tazer darts away I grabbed my night vision goggles and scanned the area to see if there was any more threats. After about 5 minutes to make sure I was alone I started to walk again. After about an hour I got the first check point and radioed to head quarters. In five miles I have another check in then I am on my own. I put on my camouflage and started to walk again. After three miles of walking I checked my GPS but it wasn’t getting a signal. I checked my radio and my phone for signal both read no signal. I saw a cliff nearby and started to walk to so I could try and get signal. But before I got to close I checked it out with my night vision and saw something I didn’t see before on the cliff disguised to blend in with the rock was a mini base that had a satellite. Maybe that is what is causing my devices from being able to get a signal. This may be a trap of maybe even this is the main base and maybe the other base that my bosses saw when they planned this mission is a decoy. The only way to find out now is to climb up there and find out. All I know is if this is the main base then there is more to their plan than we thought. Now I am thinking that the python was no accident I think it was a trap and that they know I am here. I wish there was another route up the mountain than this one. They are probably waiting to catch me at the top. If I hurry before daybreak I may be able to climb up the other side and sneak in from the top of the mountain. As I started on my way I saw a tripwire that went around the base of the mountain. After that I knew I had reached the main base and that my whole mission relied on if I make it to the other side and and climb up and sneak into the base without setting off any traps that the enemy has set to keep intruders out. If I fail to get the info the whole U.S. will fall apart and be open to other countries to take over and ruin the lives of the U.S. people. Alot rest on me completing this mission but no pressure.This mission restarts here...


  1. Kris, I'm sorry that I didn't get to your Google Doc to post comments on it in time bofore you posted this piece....but I''ve got to say is the strongest you've written so far. The way you go about describing parts of the story, not just telling me they happened, actually makes me feel like I'm there when I'm reading it. And how the snake had significance later on....that's quality story writing! Great post!

  2. WOW this was a really great story the way you put so much neat detials in to it made me want to read more of the story thanks for intertaining me!!!!!!!!!! i hope u come out with another series! :D


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